Sunday, March 8, 2020

IOC


IOC: https://voca.ro/gdCdqMCR4s0

Passage analyzed: Macbeth- "the king hath happily received, Macbeth....in deepest consequence"

Planning: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Nb0X_XejsndA2Ccp8Y-TZFmkwr1Hmp1CFD84IPNTDDA/edit

Scoring:
A: (5)- I think my knowledge of the text was baseline but could've been deeper.  Maybe more textual evidence could have helped with this
B: (5)- While I had techniques, I think I could've identified and connected them better
C: (3)- The structure was okay, but it was hard to have a really coherent structure with only twenty minutes of prep
D: (3)- I paused and used "um" and "like" a lot, which probably impeded my argument some by stopping the flow.
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1 comment:

  1. Lauren GeneskyMarch 14, 2020 at 12:03 PM

    Hey Allie-
    Always remember to consider the effect each device or technique has on the passage (normally to establish or emphasize the “big idea”) as well as the effect it has on the reader (criteria B on the rubric). Remember to use TOPIC SENTENCES to guide your reader- these are necessary and missing from your commentary. Keep linking back to your thesis/the purpose of the passage!
    A: 6
    B: 6
    C: 3
    D: 4

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